Love your first draft of the cover feature. These sex tricks are pretty sexy. Great job. I’ve made notes on a couple of the entries. I hope they help you write the *sex*t draft (next draft).
#5: Spelling error on “contagious.”
#16: This one doesn’t make sense without an illustration
#17: This illustration doesn’t make sense.
#34: Isn’t this the same as #23, just upside down?
#41: Very sexy
#48: Repetitive diction. Can you think of another word for clit?
#55: No need to write this all the way out. Just say FDR.
#58: Check your arithmetic, this should come out to 7.5.
#59: Too sexy? Your call.
#61: Zaire is now called Congo.
#62: Let’s run this by legal.
P.S. – Talked to Cameron’s people. Her doctor gave the green light for the cover
shoot, now we’re just waiting to hear from the balloon man.