Re: January Cosmo Article, “95 Sex Tricks for Hotter Sex” – The Harvard Lampoon

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Re: January Cosmo Article, “95 Sex Tricks for Hotter Sex”

  WCS '11

Beth,
Love your first draft of the cover feature. These sex tricks are pretty sexy. Great job. I’ve made notes on a couple of the entries. I hope they help you write the *sex*t draft (next draft).

Mindy

#5: Spelling error on “contagious.”

#16: This one doesn’t make sense without an illustration

#17: This illustration doesn’t make sense.

#34: Isn’t this the same as #23, just upside down?

#41: Very sexy

#48: Repetitive diction. Can you think of another word for clit?

#51: Sexy.

#55: No need to write this all the way out. Just say FDR.

#58: Check your arithmetic, this should come out to 7.5.

#59: Too sexy? Your call.

#61: Zaire is now called Congo.

#62: Let’s run this by legal.

#84: Impossible.

P.S. – Talked to Cameron’s people. Her doctor gave the green light for the cover
shoot, now we’re just waiting to hear from the balloon man.